I have been alternately working on this and casting it aside for several months, and eventually added tons of details that made it work.
Also it is my second attempts at copic marker work!
When I sketched this originally it was accompanied by a story of a girl who ventures out into the forest to find the fox demon. Legend has it that the demon is very sly and cunning, but is the only one with the power to save her dying Grandma. The story did not really develop any more than that, but I ended up liking this pic